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Re: Mirror Images |
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Vassago |
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May 10, 03 - 10:04 PM |
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GodSellsLies@hotmail.com |
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I like it. Your work is well done. I like the mirrior concept. I do a similar thing in my writing. I will write about a subject (sometimes being beaten like so) and I will tell it with out saying anything about the subject. I suppose you could say the entire poem is done in metaphors
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Replying to: As I look into her eyes,
Lost and tormented,
Broken heart, Broken mind.
I get lost in the darkness of agony,
in her entrapping chapels.
I look at her body,
Bruised and tortured.
How can anyone deserve this to happen?
I get lost in her hopelessness that has
taken over her mind.
I look into her mind,
Damaged and disoriented.
And i can see every cause of her pain.
I get lost in the thought that this girl
is none other than me. |
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