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Re: Sci-Fantasy, Action

There's not enough here to be interesting.
Give us an adjective for the main character.
"Cybersapien" means nothing to the reader.

The goal of "fight the government because they are bad" isn't interesting. Tell us why THIS person is fighting them. Why are you telling their story?