Very interesting question.
It was very mysterious how Joseph had contact with his granddaddy who passed away even before when he was born. I remember the scenes when M. had his old desk brought in the house, and young Joseph sat under it to call his granddaddy. His ghost appeared to him, and have conversations with him although J. had never seen him alive...
In this story perhaps you could give your readers a gimpse on what the children eventually will become later, when they will be grown up... I mean what their interests and their secrets dreams are.
Great idea!! I will think of it and when something will pop in my head I'll let you know.
Oh there is one thing, I love how kids pronounce things different. Maybe they can find things like that. Like 'swirl' Katies doll.
Great question about the "pockles" lol pickles
My girl(almost2) says "Sully" instead of sorry. (and no I had nothing to do with it )
Worried about the first few ... wondering about the ghost...as long as it's a nice one, it's ok . A party is always fun. But the ones who follow to that got me confused What did you do?!?
The heart, white horseand house are alright, I hope*fingers crossed* (will sully swipe her of her feet )The train he's leaving.
Still trying to figure out what the next are.. lol And the last part, well what can I say about that