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I love Chapter 3!!!!! All the children have so different characters but always Sully and Michaela like. Katie is growing up so quickly and is a small version of Michaela but also her sensitve nature that comes from Sully shows that she really is their daughter! Just love her. Joey is a genius...he always makes me laugh and his curiousity is so full of life!! It is fantastic to watch him as he grows with each chapter! The twins are so cute and Hope is just adorable!!!
I am curious what reason Sully has why he wants to take the job apart from the money! And as we know Michaela, she eventually will agree to it....I just hope she will be fine once he left and will keep going back to the hospital!
Thanks, Debby for this great chapter!! Looking forward to tomorrow!!!
I always love to read about the kids, especially because they have ups and downs as any other kid.
I'm wondering what Noah will do when he learns that his father will leave... once again. Sigh. I'm sure that Michaela will support Sully once she learns that this will be about helping Indians - not that I'm very happy about that . Looking forward to tomorrow's chapter!!!!!!
Thanks, Marion. Your thoughts about Noah and Michaela's reactions are insightful.
All the best,
Thanks, Tina. It's nice to know that my effort to give each of the children distinctive personalities is coming through.
I appreciate hearing from you.
All the best,
Debby I love this chapter Beautifull, Kathy is growing so fast she is almost like Brian when M&S got married.She looks so much like her ma,but with Sully personality,and Joe I like him alot he is so curios about things,and Noah I think M&S will have more problems with him that what they used to have with Joey I wonder how Joey and Noah will take Sully leaving again Grat chapter,looking forward for tomorrows chapter.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Rosie. I think you will be "enthusiastic" about tomorrow's chapter.
All the best.