Hi Debby: Somebody(like) Michaela should walk in to see what Preston is planing to do to Joseph. I hope with the kids being in the bank make Preston stop.

I agree with Marion there is a potencial stories to be write from this story. I hope you let us know how Pikes Pike climbing will be.(that is a hard word to write) I'm sad 'cause chapter 17 is tomorrow but I enjoy it alot,and learn too.

Hi, Rosie. I appreciate the encouragement of writing a story about M&S climbing Pikes Peak one day.
Hopefully, all readers will find the final chapter tomorrow to be worthwhile.
All the best,
Debby K