If you don't mind a suggestion I'd say try to put more into the logline as to what the film will be about. Right now they all sound kind of general. What kind of incident is going to put them in danger? A murderous stalker or a madman following them with his truck like in the hitcher? Imagine what the logline for "The Hitcher" was (actually, google it and see).Give a potential producer something to grab on to so they will want to read the entire script. No one would have read "The Hitcher" script if the part of the mad truck driver was left out of the pitch.

Also, your loglines make me wonder why the title is Naughty Nata? Is she going to be the main protagonist or antagonist? She isn't even mentioned in any of your variations. Make a producer say "I gotta read this script".