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A novice nun about to take her vows uncovers a money-laundering scheme in her parish that threatens the sanctity of the church and causes her to question her own faith.
Tell us more about the main character. Needs an adjective for the nun. What is the film about? Questioning her faith? That's not interesting. What is she going to DO about it. Audiences like active characters.
These are great tips. Very helpful. Thanks. In an effort to keep the log line brief, it's true I left a lot of good detail out.